diff --git a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-common-tasks.xml b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-common-tasks.xml index aeb89024aa..3eb8febefa 100644 --- a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-common-tasks.xml +++ b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-common-tasks.xml @@ -2710,10 +2710,10 @@ Trim the Kernel - Kernel is built by including policies for hardware-independent + The kernel is built by including policies for hardware-independent aspects. What subsystems do you enable? - What architecture are you building for? + For what architecture are you building? Which drivers do you build by default. You can modify the kernel source if you want to help with boot time. @@ -2737,7 +2737,7 @@ will be smaller by a relatively constant factor in a compressed kernel image. Look to reduce the areas that are large and taking up around - the "90% rule". + the "90% rule." @@ -2760,7 +2760,7 @@ After figuring out what to eliminate, you need to reconfigure - kernel to reflect those changes during the next build. + the kernel to reflect those changes during the next build. You could run menuconfig and make all your changes at once. However, that makes it difficult to see the effects of your @@ -2772,7 +2772,7 @@ fragments into a single configuration file using merge_config.sh. The tool makes it easy for you to iterate using the - configuration change/build cycle. + configuration change and build cycle. diff --git a/documentation/ref-manual/migration.xml b/documentation/ref-manual/migration.xml index 69f0f8d3a2..7aefcfd08d 100644 --- a/documentation/ref-manual/migration.xml +++ b/documentation/ref-manual/migration.xml @@ -314,8 +314,7 @@ MACHINEOVERRIDES or DISTROOVERRIDES variables, as appropriate. - For more changes regarding the - SRC_URI variable, see the + For more related changes, see the "Variables" section.